Can't feel my face

November 13: attacks in Paris

Last Friday, more than 120 people were killed and hundreds others injured after a series of coordinated terrorist attacks across Paris.
At the Bataclan theatre in east Paris, Kalishnikov-wielding gunmen stormed the building and fired blindy into the crowd.
At the Stade de France, at least three are thought to have been killed bt three separate explosions - one of which is thought to be a suicide bomber.
Islamic State has claimed responsibility for multiple attacks in Paris.

I feel especially sad of what happened that day, because we are talking about my homeland, France.
Fortunately, I have no family living in Paris.
All my thoughs for the victims and their family.

Peer response. Introduction and conclusion

For: Sandrine Alcon
By: Elvira Sánchez Cánovas

Dear Sandrine,
If you selected to study literature, you would be a good writer. 
I think that you have good, nice and absolutely original ideas for writing... You should write more context, however, it is a very good outline for writing a nice essay.

Introduction and conclusion

Space Debris

Space Debris is still fallen to the Earth, and in many cases, it can cause catastrophic explosions and fatal consecuences for humans, like cáncer or tumors. Animals are also concerned, destroying their wildlife. However, this reality is something common in our daily lives, and to protect us from this fact, engineers and astronauts should reforce the ways of frontering space debris and radioactive materials.

Because of the possibe dangers of space debris for the environment and for human life, we should  take more care of the solutions found for it. Those solutions have to be more effective, with the goal of avoiding all kinf of situations that may danger humans, animals and the environment. To reforce this idea, here we have a quotation of Neil Armstrong: ''We should take care of our planet as good as we take care of our kids.''

Outline;
I. (Introduction)
II. Suggestions of researchers
     A. A pressurised gas container
     B. Origin from a rocket or a satellit
III. The made of this objects
      A. A very strong material
      B. Not dangerously radioactive or explossive
IV. (Conclusion)

Neil Armstrong

Scrub Daddy

Yesterday in class, the teacher showed us a video about how important is to sell well a product. They took as example this video about a man selling a sponge, ''Scrub Daddy''. I was very impressed by the habbility of this man, and how convincing he sounded.

Outline

War of 1812

I. The War of 1812 is something that has affected many Britain and American people, due to the violence used and its devasting consecuences.

II. Declaring war
    A. Madison's declaration of War
         1. Date
         2. Reason
    B. Congress declares War
         1. Debate in Congress
             a. War Hawks
             b. Federalist 
         2. Declaration of War

III. The War of 1812
      A. The War in 1812-1813
           1. Preparations for War
           2. Invasion of Canada

IV. Because of the reasons and the goals of this War, it's considered as the birth of a new spirit of national unity young nation, although it had also very bad consecuences for the Britain and American nation.

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