Description of Viki

My best friend's name is Viki and she's one of the best persons I've ever met. She's a very pretty girl: tall, blond and with beautiful brown eyes. Although her marks at school are not so good, I consider her a very intelligent and mature girl.
I love to spend time with her. When we were younger, we used to do many things together: she stayed in my house every weekend, we went out for a walk and I saw every day. Nowadays, we both have a boyfriend, I study here in Murcia and that's the reason why I don't see her as much as we used to. Buy I still love her and consider her my best friend and the best person who 
knows me.

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Peer response 
for: Sandrine Alcon
by: Elvira Cánovas Sánchez

From my point of view, I think that you could be a good English teacher. You use a lot of vocabulary as adjectives and nouns; but it isn't all because you've got a good grammar. 
If you practise and study a little more, you can become an artist so let's go! Remember the famous phrase: ''Don't dream your life, live your dreams''. 
On the other hand, I would change the relation with your best friend, because you can have many boyfriends, but only one good friend. If I were you, I would spend more time with Viki.
In the structure form I can see that you have chosen a good organisation because you put a topic sentence talking about your friend. Then, you speak about her adding more information (supporting sentences) and finally you use a concluding sentence: ''Nowadays, we both have a boyfriend...'' ''... and that's the reason why I don't see her as much as we used to. But I still love her and consider her my best friend and the best person who knows me''.

(Viki and me, at a friend's birthday)